Rate my Yu-Gi-Oh Beatdown Deck?

well if you do achieve lock down and than summon jinzo your traps effects are stoped, you should add amplifier, with light of intervention and a solemn judgment or a dark bribe or two you have total lock down, they cant destroy jinzo with ryko, they cant sack for a monarch, play traps, or play vortex thanks to material. I thinks it a really good deck, nice job 10/10